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Sitting on my bed,
Thinking all alone,
About some girls I know,
Whose actions I can not condone.
How could they be so stupid,
Fall into temptation,
Leading them down a path
Marked by limitations.
Their “man” may stay by them,
And hold their hand.
But the ones that will not,
I can not stand.
How could they just believe them,
Take them at face value,
Believing that they mean it,
When they say “I love you”.
My only hope is that girls will learn,
From another’s mistake,
And realize the result
One little choice can make.
Thinking all alone,
About some girls I know,
Whose actions I can not condone.
How could they be so stupid,
Fall into temptation,
Leading them down a path
Marked by limitations.
Their “man” may stay by them,
And hold their hand.
But the ones that will not,
I can not stand.
How could they just believe them,
Take them at face value,
Believing that they mean it,
When they say “I love you”.
My only hope is that girls will learn,
From another’s mistake,
And realize the result
One little choice can make.
This is a poem I wrote in this poem in a fit of rage about a week ago. One of my friends told me she skipped her period. She is number 6. Here is an explaination. The path of limitations is the life that about 6 girls in my school will have to deal with now that they are pregant. They are so stupid!!! And guess what... only two are getting married! Why because the guys do not want to marry them yet. They say things like, "We are to young!". Oh and guess what else...the youngest is about 13 years old!
I am disgusted at the world and all its problems right now!
If you are going to mess around, at least be freaking smart about it!!
This is a warning to everybody. Especially girls because guys don't HAVE to deal with this particular situtation. And to any guys reading this... if you are in this spot, don't just ditch her! 
I am disgusted at the world and all its problems right now!
If you are going to mess around, at least be freaking smart about it!!This is a warning to everybody. Especially girls because guys don't HAVE to deal with this particular situtation. And to any guys reading this... if you are in this spot, don't just ditch her!
© 2006 - 2024 Ketzadetra
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ii agree 100%
ladies if he loves you (and ii kno thiis sounds cliiche, but)
he'll waiit if u mean that much too hiim
ladies if he loves you (and ii kno thiis sounds cliiche, but)
he'll waiit if u mean that much too hiim